@techreport{oai:nuis.repo.nii.ac.jp:00003501, author = {Maeda, Keiji and Maeda, Keiji}, month = {Apr}, note = {In the first semester, some students in the international business course took “paragraph writing class.” In the examination, they were assigned to write an essay which recommends their university to high school students effectively with the reference of the information on the Internet.  In order to evaluate their writing, I decided to ask my American friend to check their writing. He is a very reliable person, William Walker, who knows both Japan and Japanese people. Because he had a career working for Japanese famous computer company as a designer of semi-conductor after he worked for IBM and other companies in the US. He graduated from U.C.Berkeley. He has an ability to judge Japanese students’ writing.}, title = {A Better Way of English Writing - through the first semester exam for juniors in paragraph writing course}, year = {2022} }